Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Writing A Completion Ofcommunity Service Letter I'm Writing A Short Story And Need A Good Motive For The Murderer In It.?

I'm writing a short story and need a good motive for the murderer in it.? - writing a completion ofcommunity service letter

I write a little story about four friends who congratulate you on a beach house in the summer to her college diploma. Then, one after the other, with one exception, all die, but when the last survivor, he discovers the identity of the murderer. Please someone a good end of the story, like all my ideas are very predictable. Please enter a valid reason for the murderer, they kill them all.

9 comments:

goldie said...

A friend made a remark to her psychiatrist, just before going on the trip. Previous sessions have become the other - jealousy classes, athletic performance, not always the girl he thought she should have been - that is has made him suspicious. He went to the police and taken seriously because a father has tried to reach one of them for a family emergency - a heart attack, his father died, Grandma - but his son? Girl? not answer the phone or SMS message, and the family is worried. The psychiatrist said that his patient is unstable, and refused to take medication. Take the time to try to kill a third person, then attempted suicide. Depends on you, if successful, or at a cliffhanger.

goldie said...

A friend made a remark to her psychiatrist, just before going on the trip. Previous sessions have become the other - jealousy classes, athletic performance, not always the girl he thought she should have been - that is has made him suspicious. He went to the police and taken seriously because a father has tried to reach one of them for a family emergency - a heart attack, his father died, Grandma - but his son? Girl? not answer the phone or SMS message, and the family is worried. The psychiatrist said that his patient is unstable, and refused to take medication. Take the time to try to kill a third person, then attempted suicide. Depends on you, if successful, or at a cliffhanger.

goldie said...

A friend made a remark to her psychiatrist, just before going on the trip. Previous sessions have become the other - jealousy classes, athletic performance, not always the girl he thought she should have been - that is has made him suspicious. He went to the police and taken seriously because a father has tried to reach one of them for a family emergency - a heart attack, his father died, Grandma - but his son? Girl? not answer the phone or SMS message, and the family is worried. The psychiatrist said that his patient is unstable, and refused to take medication. Take the time to try to kill a third person, then attempted suicide. Depends on you, if successful, or at a cliffhanger.

Dan said...

elderly mentally unstable does not seem very old, because he is a veteran, and he is extremely strong. as the Torrens Lake. In any case, the last child, and they wonder why the old man said something racist. "Have you ever (of a race, or rather ethnicity here) after killing her partner lagh? Ever a slit throat Mans, while still laughing. Not applicable (This is a lot of sense, but there are implications RAP hes crazy) to your friends deserve to die, and you too! ya hear me (prophanity race here)! ill kill ya! "hes probably with or seriously injured as she spoke. To explain a week later, the survivors, their parents and parents what police found in the basement Mans. make their own creative places or objects into the basement.

Dan said...

elderly mentally unstable does not seem very old, because he is a veteran, and he is extremely strong. as the Torrens Lake. In any case, the last child, and they wonder why the old man said something racist. "Have you ever (of a race, or rather ethnicity here) after killing her partner lagh? Ever a slit throat Mans, while still laughing. Not applicable (This is a lot of sense, but there are implications RAP hes crazy) to your friends deserve to die, and you too! ya hear me (prophanity race here)! ill kill ya! "hes probably with or seriously injured as she spoke. To explain a week later, the survivors, their parents and parents what police found in the basement Mans. make their own creative places or objects into the basement.

Dan said...

elderly mentally unstable does not seem very old, because he is a veteran, and he is extremely strong. as the Torrens Lake. In any case, the last child, and they wonder why the old man said something racist. "Have you ever (of a race, or rather ethnicity here) after killing her partner lagh? Ever a slit throat Mans, while still laughing. Not applicable (This is a lot of sense, but there are implications RAP hes crazy) to your friends deserve to die, and you too! ya hear me (prophanity race here)! ill kill ya! "hes probably with or seriously injured as she spoke. To explain a week later, the survivors, their parents and parents what police found in the basement Mans. make their own creative places or objects into the basement.

Oink! said...

Survival is one of the murder of family members?

qazsdrer said...

Jealousy

Emor said...

Relationships are the key to this story.
It is not only the murderer is a must for every kill, so you kill each person. This means there must be one that came with the idea and urged all others - was the election of his victims and their location.

What does this mean?
- The house on the beach must be isolated because it is not a place where he could easily have snatched choose to do.
- Could the scene of death such as accidents, so our survival must understand that people have been killed in the first place before we can draw conclusions about who and why.
- We may need more than 4 people if it will happen.
- The murderer must in some way by each of his victims injured. He hates it. Why do they hate depends on who they are and what their history is with them. Sure, there must be an ex-girlfriend and the guy who "stole", but the rest depends on you.
- The pension must be a murderer hates the minimum or more. Itdepends on whether he has saved the best for last move "or the least wants to kill.
- (After all, would be a nice gesture for the completion of the survivors of his fight with the murderer who intends, after everyone is dead, killed because, as already mentioned that) who hates his life and to kill his own defense. Then our hero must be removed in the small town a few miles and police say there are a lot of people killed in the beach house and completely kill him - and with one exception, but it's defense. Really. I swear.

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